User talk:Lwang6/Donghu District
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!
You have done some very impressive work here -- just keep going in this direction. You are well-positioned to make a significant contribution to public knowledge of this topic. Bravo! I particularly appreciate your effort in making a population graph. One topic to think about is whether you might want to shorten the demographic section to offer only the most recent numbers. You also might want to run the article through a grammar checker to pick up small errors and help the text to flow.
Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:05, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
Peer review is done by your classmate from Com481 Ivy Chen
[edit]Hi! My name is Ivy Chen, and I am your classmate from COM 481. I have already finished your peer review. Please check and let me know if you have further questions! Great job! Ivychen0619 (talk) 09:31, 28 January 2022 (UTC).
Hello! I just added my peer review to your sandbox! I hope that my insights are helpful and good luck with the rest of the article. Please let me know if you have any questions. Looking forward to see it! Steph.tsaii (talk) 08:44, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
Go Live Approval
[edit]Hi @Lwang6:!
I think you should make this article live when you're ready. Reminder of our go-live steps....
- Final read-through draft.
- Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
- Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
- Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
- Note on article talk page.
- Note at the top of your sandbox version.
- Celebrate!
This is a big article, so take your time with the merger. Great work! Kaylea Champion (talk) 21:52, 6 February 2022 (UTC)