User talk:LuluThrower/sandbox
Hi Lulu:
Gotta give you props for starting a page from scratch on a guy that is hard to find info about!
Here are some of my suggestions: 1) Your reference in the first section "Paul Willis" is still broken, as it shows up as "<ref=Interview With Paul Willis>"
2) Paul Willis' Work is widely read in the fields of sociology, anthropology, and education, his work emphasizing consumer culture, socialization, music,and popular culture.
- lower case "w?"
- I think that should be it's own sentence, OR moved to the beginning of the sentence right after "work" >> "Willis' work, which emphasizes consumer culture, socialization, music,and popular culture, is widely read..."
3) Not sure what the "outline" section is for [unless you have already fleshed sections out and removed it from a previous list you had]
4) "An Englishman’s Home Is His Castle? A Response to Paul Willis’s Unemployment: The Final Inequality"
- Did you mean for that to be in a box?
5) Maybe throw in a picture of him
6) Perhaps you can link to his page on the Princeton page http://www.princeton.edu/sociology/faculty/willis/ as a reference to him working there. --Keyohful (talk) 19:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)