User talk:Lrr00006/Monongah Mine Disaster

Your initial draft is very organized and the layout seems very thoroughly thought out. It makes your draft very clearly structured and easy to understand. After looking over the actual Monongah Mine Disaster article, it was definitely in need of the expansion that you are providing. There's also room for you to add on to each of your sections just to add a bit more detail for the audience. I also like the notes section that you added at the end, I think that I could use this idea within my article. To improve your article I think that it would help to check over grammar and spelling. --Marissasantora (talk) 21:14, 10 March 2021 (UTC)