User talk:Lndavis/sandbox

Many people have an unrealistic views sounds a little too personal. Make sure its objective. The content is really good.

Balthasar104 (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2012 (UTC)Balthasar104[reply]

Good amount of sources. If available, add links for organizations such as IMATA. Other than that, it was good. TBarsha (talk) 18:33, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Take out the step one, step two, est.

Good information in the introduction

Write who did the 2010 study.

Can any of the advocacy organizations, eco-tourism companies, university research laboratories, industrial research centers, private companies, and government research laboratories or marine stations be linked in wikipedia?

Expand on the schools like what they do during school years, ie. work with the animals or just study.

The International Marine Animal Trainers' Association was well written.

--Jbcannon727 (talk) 18:34, 5 April 2012 (UTC)Jbcannon727[reply]