User talk:Liz Beres/KEIGWIN+COMPANY

Language here is still too promotional

The language here is still too promotional, too much like a press release and not sufficiently dispassionate. Your non-neutral point of view seems to be shading your perceptions. --Orange Mike | Talk 15:58, 28 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move

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The result of the move request was page not moved to article space —harej (talk) (cool!) 00:03, 9 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

User:Liz Beres/KEIGWIN+COMPANY → KEIGWIN + COMPANY — When I requested the name of this page to be changed from Liz Beres to KEIGWIN + COMPANY, I was told that KEIGWIN + COMPANY was on the black list of names and therefore could not be confirmed. This is the only proper title for this page and those interested in learning about the dance company will not be able to find it if this change is not approved. Thank you for respecting our behest. Liz Beres (talk) 16:08, 1 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

2 issues right off the bat. 1)No third party sources (both sources are primary sources). 2)The name should not be all capitalized, and maybe no "+" in the title. The name should be "Keigwin + Company" (or something like "Keigwin & Company"). TJ Spyke 18:16, 1 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Additionally, the use of the phrase "our behest" implies to us that you are acting on behalf of the subject organization still (or again). --Orange Mike | Talk 18:41, 1 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Strong oppose and suggest delete for all the reasons above. A quick Google search reveals the author is an "administrative intern" for the company in question. Wikipedia does not exist to be a cheap promotional tool for companies. Hippo (talk) 23:01, 6 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.