User talk:Lascencio/sandbox
overall the draft is very good and detailed. the details given in education section is pretty straight forward. the only suggestion I can give to improve the draft is to put the second paragraph of early life under education section since it is more related to educational information about Stephen Leone than place of origin and his upbringing experience.
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