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Feedback on article contribution

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Comments are in no particular order:

  • Very good job maintaining neutral tone, I think, while still getting across your intended contribution.
  • Expansion/elaboration - your plans for adding information about another religion seem to be a natural here.
  • Very good first draft.Jagrif02 (talk) 20:14, 18 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]