User talk:Khiya04/Clostridium perfringens

R.rickettsii Peer Group Review

Hello C. perfringens, upon reviewing your article our group had a few suggestions regarding the use of grammar and verbiage throughout the article. We also had a few suggestions about linking content within the "Major Toxins" and "Genome" sections. Overall, you all had great evidence for your article; however, we noticed two of your references were out of the ten year range for peer reviewed articles. We do not think this is a rule to have, but we wondered if there were more recent articles that would still support your claims. Do not forget to add in an opening paragraph at the start of your Wikipedia article that includes the information you have listed in your draft. We recommend going back through the article to make sure the tone is uniform and to ensure that the same structure is used throughout. For example, your bacteria was not italicized consistently and it can be abbreviated after its first reference in a paragraph. We also recommend focusing more on your "Major Toxins" and "Genome" sections by linking content to other Wikipedia articles, such as diseases, and expanding the antibiotic resistance segment. - R.rickettsii Group Supergirl02 (talk) 01:33, 7 October 2023 (UTC)