User talk:Kellykilber/sandbox

Is your sandbox where you and Alex are making your PICU changes? Kmartsbest (talk) 17:26, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I think that the information you have mentioned so far is relevant and encyclopedic, however I would consider changing the definition of the PICU patients and maybe distinguish the difference between a NICU and a PICU and how it is determined where the patient will go, like is it under 12 months NICU or just after birth and if re-admitted PICU? Overall, the areas you are hitting I think are right on the money, but are still in the very beginning stages of drafting. Citations are present, but not by using the "cite" button, which creates a hidden citation and automatic list. Kmartsbest (talk) 17:35, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I feel that the information that you have right now just touches on the surface of things. I would like to see you dive further into some of the definition of things and also more of a background of PICU. I did notice that you are missing a citation in one of your sections,Certifications and knowledge, so I would make sure to correct that area. It would also be nice to see the reasoning behind the Nurse to Patient Ratio and why they have it set up the way that they do. Ll128576 (talk) 23:20, 13 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I like the improvements that you two have made to this article. I did a couple minor editing of terminology directly to the page. Such as using "endotracheal tube (ET tube)" instead of breathing tube. I also think that you should add something about PALS (pediatric advanced life support) certification. I agree with the edits that the other students added to the talk page as well, especially the difference between NICU and PICU and whether or not the patient will go to PICU after discharge from the hospital. Pauliana Landreth (talk) 00:11, 19 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review Response

Thank you all for the additional information and tips for our wiki page. Each idea will definitely help us improve our page regarding the Pediatric Intensive Care Unit. Because we had several general ideas written out, your reviews will guide us in better direction when it comes to adding and editing information. Thanks again! Kelly Kilber 21:31, 20 October 2017 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kellykilber (talk • contribs)

Thank you everyone for your feedback. We will work to incorporate all of the feedback into our article because they are all great suggestions. We definitely need a more accurate definition of the PICU and need to work on our sourcing. Thank you all again! Akammin (talk) 23:40, 27 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing the article and giving us some ideas to expand on. Will definitely try to incorporate them into the article.TLund (talk) 18:27, 27 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]