User talk:Kelibzon

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Speedy deletion Question

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Hi. I received your message that the page I created (Arrivedo) was nominated for speedy deletion. However, the feedback I have read on this page is rather generic. Could you please let me know the specific mistakes in the draft so I know what should be edited. Thanks!

Kelibzon (talk) 21:11, 17 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'm going to leave the help-me template in place in case an administrator cares to look at your deleted draft and give more tailored comments.

Editors whose initial efforts are speedily deleted have run afoul of at least one of several pitfalls; among them are copying material from another website (not in this case, apparently), or writing in laudatory or advertising style language (the nominal reason for this deletion). Later potential pitfalls are not providing suitable references and not providing clear evidence of why the subject is "notable" in the Wikipedia sense of the word.

I'll append a welcome message here that has a bunch of pointers about WP editing that you should probably look into. The your first article introduction is a good place to start if you haven't read it already. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 22:59, 17 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

If the draft had just suffered a few specific shortcoings that could easily be fixed, it would not have been deleted. Nothing short of a complete rewriting would have sufficed. Among specific problems:

It was heavily based on what the company and CEO have to say about themselves.
Significant parts were off-topic.
The tone was promotional throughout, so much so that I believe it included factually incorrect claims.
It presented (positive) opinion as fact.
Multiple paragraphs were unreferenced.

No part of the draft was free of those issues. Huon (talk) 01:16, 18 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Arrivedo

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Arrivedo, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the deleting administrator. Legacypac (talk) 11:03, 17 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Kelibzon, good luck, and have fun. — jmcgnh^{(talk) (contribs)} 23:01, 17 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]