User talk:KC1200/sandbox

WICKYPEARS Peer Review

Peer Review: I looked at your resources, looks good so far. Wickypears (talk) 17:46, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Thanks! Please remember to sign your post. KC1200 (talk) 16:44, 20 October 2020 (UTC)

Hey just waiting for you to add stuuf, good job on your oral presentation though. Can't wait to see what you add. Wickypears (talk) 07:41, 20 November 2020 (UTC)

Your sentence about the structure is simple and clear, good job. Your sentence under functions, "It is believed that, because of this feature, Lcn1’s main function is to remove potentially harmful lipids and lipophilic molecules from the body by binding them and then imported via lipocalin-1-interacting membrane receptor (LIMR) so the bound molecule can be broken down (cite to Wojnar P)," is pretty long. I think that the beginning clause could be reworked to have a smoother transition. It is kind of bumpy to say "it is believed that" maybe there is something else that you could say. also in this sentence whenyou say, :and then imported," it is not very clear about what is imported. I would make this a separate sentence or use more simple language.

History: "Lipocalin-1 was initial thought to be produced" make sure that you say INITIALLY.

Clinical: When a cell is under stress, due to inflammation, infection, or otherwise, it will produced elevated, : you need to change produced into produce and then this sentence is really good. Overall good job! Can't wait to see your picture as well and what it will add. Wickypears (talk) 07:40, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

A link to my total peer review as suggested by the wikipedia classroom is linked here: Peer Review Full Wickypears (talk) 05:24, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

Narvikvaren Peer Review

Sources look great! Narvikvaren (talk) 17:55, 28 October 2020 (UTC) Lots of good material here! This will significantly increase the content in the article and make it much more informative. The information is also concise and easy to read and understand. Well Done! Narvikvaren (talk) 17:38, 1 December 2020 (UTC) If you're looking for a good way to cite your sources, I found a free APA citation generator that worked really well for me. All you need is the article title and usually it can find all the info you need. Here it is. Wikipedia cites it automatically with the article title too. Narvikvaren (talk) 14:52, 2 December 2020 (UTC) Linked here is a peer review from me using wikipedia's template Narvikvaren (talk) 15:03, 2 December 2020 (UTC) I see that you got it uploaded to the page, looks great! Narvikvaren (talk) 02:38, 12 December 2020 (UTC)