User talk:Jwills725/twoarticlereview

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We talked about the issues of wikipedia's standards in our meeting thursday. but the assignment was to review the article and to write a wikipedia type article. Either way you chose, you had something to write about, either the article or the literature review. You chose the article and what they did and what they found. so the question is, how would that be written up in wikipedia? the above passage doesn't have the tone nor style of a wikipedia article. Take this article, for example, https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Team_effectiveness#Self-managed_work_teams the style and tone of Brandon's article is nothing like yours. Dr Ashton (talk) 20:59, 20 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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And just typing the abstract? Dr Ashton (talk) 20:59, 20 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Your changes are an improvement. For next week (10/31) I'd like to see you put the citations into wikipedia format. Dr Ashton (talk) 18:35, 24 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]