User talk:Jromai3/sandbox

Hey Jromai3. I took a look at your article and have to say I am very impressed. Your content is very clear and concise. Everything with the citations looks to be in order, and cited correctly. The article kept a neutral position on the matter, while also giving the reader a lot of useful information. Also the information is set up to make it very easy for the reader to understand and find important information quickly. The thing I liked most about this article was the flow. It all seemed very easy to read. I think this article has a bone structure, but now it just needs a little more meat on those bones. I think the article just needs a bit more information of the topic. In conclusion, I believe, this article could go out to a public audience, but I would advise adding a little more information.

Hi Collinwoods12, please add your signature to the above comment. Add four "~" after the last sentence. Thanks! Transunicorn (talk) 18:37, 20 March 2016 (UTC)