User talk:Jksvoboda/sandbox

good information and good use of sources. for the second paragraph since you are starting a new paragraph it should be independent of the previous paragraph so I think the use of "shortly after that" is somehow ambiguous to start with. (Sadafprs (talk) 06:06, 24 November 2016 (UTC))Sadafprs (talk) 06:06, 24 November 2016 (UTC)