User talk:Jessben12/sandbox

I enjoyed your topic! The introductory was a little choppy but certainly caught my attention. Keep up the good work and cannot wait to read the finished product!BBurns08 (talk) 17:20, 21 February 2011 (UTC)BBurns08[reply]

You have a good start and a compelling topic. I have the sense that you know were you want to take your research and literature review. Jjdick3978 —Preceding undated comment added 19:53, 21 February 2011 (UTC).[reply]

An interesting topic and a difficult one to stay nonobjective. Finding related sources may be difficult, but your research could have significant impact. Jlinehan07 (talk) 19:56, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lets move some information from your sandbox page to your talk page or to your main user page. Continue to cite sources in the reveiw of literature and be careful with the use of questions within a review of literature. Have you found additional resources? What evidence have these resources shared? Erhall (talk) 04:48, 28 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]