User talk:Jduden/sandbox

Hi, Jduden!

You got some great feedback from Gobonobo, which you can access here:Talk:Media_activism.

In addition, I suggest thinking about:

Creating and inserting a good, citation-based definition of media activism.
Changing "limitations" to a heading about social media activism in media-censored environments. (Of course, you need a better name for this - maybe borrowing from terms that Freedom House uses?) Then, you can write a paragraph about what Gobonobo suggested - River crab (Internet slang), etc. The Wallis article might be a source for this? The point is that media activism becomes a form of resistance even when the political environment is quite restrictive.
How to choose what to say about Venezuela, China, Arab Spring, etc...can you consider a structure for makingyour sections parallel to each other, so the information in one somewhat aligns with information in another. Can you create an outline that each case study will roughly follow? We could meet early on Thursday to talk about this if you want?

Keep up the good work!Prof.Vandegrift (talk) 19:45, 23 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

Jduden- I sent my rubric with feedback to you via email. I think your article is a good start that needs expansion and stylistic revision to make it a great contribution to Wikipedia! Let me know if I can help with anything! KLi 32 (talk) 16:30, 29 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]