User talk:Jcreeggan/Blond capuchin

Hi Sarah, Thanks for taking a look at my article. A few questions about your suggestions: should I put a citation at the end of each sentence if I am citing the same article each time? For example, the Diet section uses the same source for a good chunk of the first part, so should I cite that article after each sentence or just leave it as I have it now? The scientific name, taxonomy, range map, and an image were already in the article when I started. I've added another image, but how many images do you think would be good? I was thinking I could ask Renata for pictures of sugarcane raiding and maybe even capuchins captured for the pet trade. She also has a video on her website of a blond capuchin grabbing a sugarcane stalk from a field, but I'd have to check again how Wikipedia is with videos and if the video being uploaded to YouTube changes anything. Jcreeggan (talk) 15:31, 24 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Jack, I'm "peer-reviewing" your article, since there was that mix-up about who was reading which articles. It's looking good. A few suggestions: 1) I would specifically put a citation at the end of each fact-based sentence; 2) I think it would be great if you could get an image into the article. You could ask Renata if she has a photo that you could upload to the commons?; 3) A range map of some sort would be useful, if possible; 4) Be sure to include the scientific name and taxonomy too. SarahSalal (talk) 19:37, 23 November 2021 (UTC)Sarah[reply]

A few more thoughts: Make sure you do a header section that follows the Wikipedia guidelines and consider linking your article to other related primate species articles on Wikipedia.SarahSalal (talk) 19:39, 23 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]