User talk:Jangelico12/sandbox

Comments on Bibliography

Jake: You might consider looking at the Jensen articles and the Kuchling article. Also, four of your citations were duplicates of previous contributions (one was a duplicate within your own list). I have removed these. Njclum (talk) 22:09, 11 November 2016 (UTC)

Comments on Outline

Jake: Good job.Njclum (talk) 01:44, 22 November 2016 (UTC)

Comments on Rough Draft

Jake: Nice temporal progression and generally well-written. Remember to italicize scientific names. Can you explain what you mean by mating being temperature-dependent? This implies that timing or frequency depends on weather. Is this true? If so, explain how. Don't forget to include citations in your final draft.Njclum (talk) 22:44, 12 December 2016 (UTC)