User talk:Jan Hue

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Hello Jan Hue, welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Liance, and I've been editing here for a while. I wanted to thank you for submitting Draft:Claus Emmelmann to WikiProject Articles for Creation and helping to grow the encyclopedia! We appreciate your contributions and hope you stick around. I can see you've already started writing draft articles, so here are a few more resources that might be helpful:

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Claus Emmelmann (September 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by OhHaiMark were:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Claus Emmelmann and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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OhHaiMark (talk) 20:56, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi OhHaiMark,

thank you a lot for reviewing my Draft:Claus Emmelmann. Could you please be so kind and give me some specific problems with my draft. Since it is a translation of an accepted german Wikipedia arcticle, I wonder what I have to adjust in this draft?

Thank you for your help

Sincerly,

Jan Hue Jan Hue (talk) 14:30, 19 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The other-language wikis have separate notability guidelines, so just because something may be accepted in that wiki, doesn't mean it'll be accepted here. The problems with this draft are that a good chunk of the draft is unsourced and it has many buzzwords and promotional language. Trim those out of the way and there is a likelihood that it'll be accepted. OhHaiMark (talk) 14:36, 19 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your very fast answer. I deleted overly promotional language and a lot of buzzwords, added a few more sources and resubmitted the draft. I hope that it will be accepted this time :) Jan Hue (talk) 12:16, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Jan Hue! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! OhHaiMark (talk) 20:56, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Claus Emmelmann has been accepted

Claus Emmelmann, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 18:41, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]