User talk:InsanitySimmer
Ways to improve The Sims 4: Spa Day
[edit]Hi, I'm Roches. InsanitySimmer, thanks for creating The Sims 4: Spa Day!
I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. Please change these to use a more encyclopedic tone by using the third person: "The expansion pack adds spas..." "The player can build..." and so on instead of "you"
The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse. Roches (talk) 22:28, 6 August 2015 (UTC)