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20:02, 15 August 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Javelin Networks (September 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage (not just mere mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies, the golden rule and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners and Help:Introduction to referencing/1), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Only an advertised business profile and the current information and sources are primarily based in this and the essence of announcements or notices, which wherever published, simply cannot establish notability itself (notability cannot be inherited either).

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SwisterTwister talk 21:25, 26 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Javelin Networks (December 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KJP1 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Do not know as to Notability, but the draft is unacceptable due to its wholly promotional tone. The Technology paragraph, which is completely unsourced, is straight-forward sales talk and completely counter to Wikipedia:Neutral point of view. This is only the most extreme of the content concerns, and the whole article reads like an advert. The single purpose account that created the draft hasn't declared a Conflict of Interest and should be aware that editors are strongly discouraged from writing about subjects to which they have a close personal/professional connection. In such circumstances, they should certainly declare a CoI.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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KJP1 (talk) 17:21, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Javelin Networks

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Javelin Networks, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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