User talk:Hinatsuki Mikan/sandbox

The current draft for this article looks good; the draft includes a lot of information and the information is spread out between many different sections that are relevant to explaining what unsaturated hydrocarbons are. I liked how the drafted article was divided into clear sections with separate headings, it made the page easy to navigate and helped group the information into relevant categories. I also liked how in the electrophilic addition section within the chemical properties section included examples of the reaction equation. This helped give context as to what could react for the specific type of reaction and contributed to explaining what that type of addition was. The list of references used looks credible with a mix of different source types, and citations were used throughout the article to cite different pieces of information. I would just be careful with the images used, specifically copyright, and make sure they are properly cited. Something that could be added to the article is a section on commercial or industrial uses of unsaturated hydrocarbons. There's a lot of information right now about what they are, but I think adding a section about how they are used or what they are used for would be beneficial. This is because it could help people apply these molecules to real life products, rather than just being a molecule that's used in chemical processes. Something else that could be added is examples of common unsaturated hydrocarbons because there are some mentioned listed by their chemical formula, but listing common unsaturated hydrocarbons by their name and formula could add useful and relevant information to the article. Maya Tang Mtang19 (talk) 03:56, 13 May 2019 (UTC)