User talk:Hanoi Volunteer

I am preparing an article on Hold the Future, a vocational training and handicraft production centre for disabled youth. Our blog is at http://holdthefuture.org if you are interested in reading about us. I am always interested in info on disability, vocational training and employment.

July 2010

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Hello, Hanoi Volunteer. You have new messages at Salvio giuliano's talk page.
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Your draft

First of all, it's a very good first article! It is a little bit too promotional, for instance the lead (Hold the Future is a Hanoi, Vietnam based charitable organisation that offers vocational training and handicraft production to young people with disabilities. The focus of the Centre is on nurturing and encouraging disabled youth to acquire skills, receive education and build self-confidence so that they can find employment or establish their own businesses thus allowing them to lead independent lives) and the section about Le Minh Hiền. If you could rewrite it to sound a little more neutral, it would be very good. Salvio ^{Let's talk 'bout it!} 16:55, 29 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]