User talk:HalfwayThrough/Sandbox/Music Education Benefits

Hi, I am a student who has been assigned the task of creating or editing a page. I have significant research collected regarding the benefits of music education, so I am going to edit this one. I will incorporate the research I have conducted, and try and bring continuity to the page as well, by rearranging in coherent way all the great information already on here. Thanks for bearing with me. I am new, but have an ambassador who will be working with me. HalfwayThrough (talk) 22:04, 4 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

First Impression

At first glance, the article looks good. You have citations in place throughout the artilce and lots of references.

Since this is in your Sandbox, I would like a link to the original article to make it easier to reference the Wikipedia article you're editing. This could be in your talk page or at the top of the content you're creating. Also, you should have the course banner at the top of your work.

Along with the link to the original article, you should have a call for input on the talk page of that original article. It looks like all your edits have been in your Sandbox, on your talk page, or on my talk page. Therefore, I presume you've not asked for input from the people involved with the article you're planning to revise.

When I have some more time, I'll read through the content and give you some feedback on that as well.
Frankcjones (talk) 02:05, 5 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Adjustments

I have added the course I think. Not really certain what this is about.

https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Music_education This is the link to the original article under the subheading significance. HalfwayThrough (talk) 15:56, 7 November 2013 (UTC) I did not realize I was only playing in my sandbox when I sent out the request. I'll re do that now.[reply]