User talk:HHonore22

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Hello, HHonore22, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:39, 27 March 2020 (UTC)

Notes

Here are the promised notes:

• This needs more sourcing. What you have is good, but it would help to have additional sourcing for a section this size.

• Only capitalize the first letter of a header title unless it's the name of a person, location, or film/book/etc title.

• This is written a little casually in places. I would avoid saying "in today's society" and rather say "In later years" or specify a century like "In the 20th and 21st centuries". You also want to avoid "yet" and "if... then..." type statements, as these are persuasive and argumentative styles that go against Wikipedia's more formal, neutral style.

• Since the page is so high profile I would recommend posting this at the article's talk page first and see what others say before posting it live. This will help prevent pushback.

I hope this helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:34, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

Hi.

I am soo sorry to disturb you, But I know you study World history and you study the history of women.

I saw you in the Marie Antoinette Talk page, so I am gonna ask you a question about Marie Antoinette’s wiki page. I also hope you work for wikipeidea because this is an inportain questain. (also sorry if I spelled anything wrong I am Russian)

On Marie Antoinette’s Wikipedia page of corse it says she was Queen of a France but before she died in the French Revolution wasn’t she stripped from her title as “Queen of France” before her death.

And also she was Queen of Navarre but it only says Queen of France.

Sorry if I disturbed you.

Bye — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2604:2000:1280:9EB1:502F:9FE2:1609:C19D (talk) 20:05, 25 September 2020 (UTC)