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Peer Review

I see that you are basically working from the ground up with only a basic description. All of your information right now is neutral and exact not making any leaps in logic. Some things I could suggest is adding more to the physical appearance in the article currently it does show pictures of the details and their cultural significance in establishing hierarchy. You seem to need more sources to establish a better understanding of how the art relates to greek culture may I suggest trying to find articles on Greek politicians at that time. I think your suggestions are very structured but, lack enough information to be a section by themselves. I also suggest finding out why the statue was made and about the pose and if it was considered a powerful pose. What sanctuary was he given to and to what god this might give clues to why this statue was made. Was he dead or commemorating a victory? All of your links work but, one was duplicated from Khan Academy. This was a very good start with more research this will be a great article.