User talk:Gwang91/sandbox

This contribution to Alvin Melveger's wikipedia page is fairly short and lacking in content. I'm not sure if you meant to post more, but this portion is slightly confusing on its own. Overall, the tone so far is fairly professional, however the contribution should probably be longer. While the citation is good, before posting on the public page, it should be converted to the Wikipedia format so that the superscripted number hyperlinks to the bottom of the page. If possible, you could also try to link to other wikipedia articles to help explain difficult concepts.

You may also want to explain what AAMI Sterilization Residuals Working Group of the American Association for Medical Instrumentation is or what they do. An explanation on the group would be helpful for further understanding. It would also be helpful if you explained what an AAMI Technical Information Report is or why one is formulated. One the same note, you should also include a description of what the paper "ANSI/AAMI/ISO 10993-7, Biological evaluation of medical devices - Part 7 Ethylene oxide sterilization residuals" is about. Overall, this contribution could benefit from added content and explanation of the scientific terms and papers. Em.vincent25 (talk) 19:45, 21 November 2016 (UTC)