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1/30/2018 Evaluation by User:Kristinnmason

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I went through all the criteria and would give you an A if I was calculating a grade. I have only good things to say about your page as far as the coding/sources/citations, etc. I like how you added the two titles to the bottom for further information however it does look incomplete as far as visual editing so I would leave those out until you have more information. That leaves the perfect place for continued editing. When I compare your edit to the original post it looks much more fluid. Overall great job, I can't wait to read more from you!

2/01/2018 Evaluation by User:avictory

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Spelling/Grammar

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Exceeds Standard (No problems as far as I can see.)

Language

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Exceeds Standard (Well-written and encyclopedic in tone.)

Organization

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Exceeds Standard (Organization is great and the flow is perfect.)

Coding

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Meets Standard (Reference/Footnote 2 has a code error, otherwise, great.)

Validity

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Exceeds Standard (Everything seems legitimate.)

Completion

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Exceeds Standard (Obviously not complete, but ideas are developed and information is elaborated on. Everything stated is explained in-depth.)

Relevance

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Exceeds Standard (Everything seems to be quite relevant. The only thing that is possibly irrelevant/speculative is the portion on Dante; maybe you could find another source to corroborate?).

Sources

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Exceeds Standard (Looks great!)

Citations

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Exceeds Standard (The only problem is that most of the citations have been inserted before the punctuation.)

References

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Exceeds Standard (Formatting looks good but reference 5 has pg. instead of just p.)

This probably wasn't particularly helpful to you, but kudos on near-perfection and being so far ahead.