User talk:Grandtutor/sandbox-GertTownDraft
Infobox
[edit]- New picture
- Something that is well known/significant in Gert Town
- Look around for some pictures that we are able to use on Wikipedia
- Multiple pictures to show numerous parts
- Double check information to make sure that it is correct and accurate
- Anything about government and officials
- Any nicknames, mottos, any symbols that represent Gert Town
- Gert Town location on map with accurate boundaries
- Date of founding, who it was named after
Lead
[edit]- Don't start each paragraph with Gert Town -- gets repetitive
- Syntax a little strange
- Need the lead to flow into the rest of the body of the content
Demographics
[edit]* Add Katrina sub-section so demographic can condense
- Combine similar information/topics so it is less repetitive
* Vertical migration paragraph put in Geography
- Put the info/dates in chronological order
Culture
[edit]Add Subcategories for specific sections such as Jazz, Hip Hop
Music category
Take out Notable People
Geography
[edit]* Eliminate boundaries section and add to Geography
- Introduce Landmarks in Geography section
- Further explain Landmarks in their own section
- Start where Gert Town is in the world
- Then other components pertaining to Geography
History
[edit]- Start with the earliest date
- 2 people mentioned in "Gehrke Town"
- Bring the last paragraph to the top
- 7 different paragraphs
- should be ordered as 7, 1, 4, 3, 2, 5, 6
- Merge #1 into #7
- Paragraph 4, end of the sentence is abrupt and does not flow
- Expand the info at the end of paragraph 4