User talk:GraceRequejo/Mira Nakashima
I would make sure to add a lead paragraph. The beginning feels a bit abrupt.It may help to mention her name in the opening sentence just so the reader knows who you are writing about, instead of starting with "she". otherwise, everything is very nicely written. Your sources and links look good as well.
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