User talk:Gmoniyee
Eng 22 Class Page
[edit]See the Eng 22 class page here: User:Eng22
Welcome
[edit]Welcome!
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Cheers. Trance addict - Armin van Buuren - Oceanlab 23:11, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
Good job!
[edit]Good job posting your intro to Wikipedia.
==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 04:10, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
1st draft comments
[edit]Good start so far with the article.
Suggestions:
- Rewrite the first sentence to read: Civil War Rifles came in many kinds.
- Good job listing sources in your Works Cited section. In addition to the URLs (website addresses), You need to add information for each source (author [if any], title(s), date(s).
Refer to the following for overall guidance on writing the article.
==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 20:06, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
Keep working at it!
[edit]You need to add references to your article.
For more information about this, see the section of Wikipedia about parenthetical citation.
Also, see if you can add a picture to your article. David can help you. Or you want to try it yourself, see Wikipedia:Picture_tutorial
==Mr Turner --Eng22 (talk) 08:06, 15 July 2008 (UTC)