User talk:Gf6f3/Sugar baby

The article does well at giving a basic explanation of the term and how its used and what its referring to. I think there could be better cultural references made and more explanation to who is using the term and making it popular and why. Some possible information that can be added to this article is more. I also think more information could be provided under prevalence and making more connections than just to students. I think that adding a prevalence page to my article could be very beneficial.

peer review 10.02.22

Holy references! There sure are a lot of them for such a short article, I feel like half the visual page is taken up by them. If there's any way to cut back before adding in new and more relevant information, that would be beneficial! The lead isn't my favorite, because it does lean into the economic benefits of sugar babies. But as we know with Ambiguous Entanglements, sugaring could come in many shapes and forms. I think this section could benefit from a direct line about the power differential between a sugar parent and baby, no matter economic/material benefit. The first sentence of prevalence reads like the lead to a journalism article to me. It doesn't feel as informational as it does biased. Over all the tone feels very geared towards a younger audience, but that's not very inclusive of the actual demographic. While there is a clientele for sugaring among academia, there lies a significant portion of people who do this well outside the realm of college. Also without naming information, the dating app info isn't very relevant. It would be interesting to see possibly a section on social impact of sugaring! Or being a sugar baby! Or possibly definitions of it and how it's changed through time. Over all, this article is missing a lot of interesting items! You all could add a lot and I'm super interested to see! Karleeseek (talk) 02:09, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Mars' Peer Review

Sugar baby

Lead Section

Discussion of “sugaring” in non-Western cultures (if this is applicable to other cultures)
Expansion of potential sexual relationships

Prevalence

Give examples on what websites are used
Discussion on history of sugar baby
Prevalence in other time periods?
Discussion of sugaring in other cultures

Legality and Comparison to Sex Work

Not much needed
Discussion of other sites that may have had discussed this topic
More discussion on courtesan
Discussion of craigslist and Ashley Madison in how they operate for sugar babies

Overall expansion of the article is needed to include more information on sugar babies in general. MNC-2016 (talk) 04:32, 3 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]