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INSTRUCTOR FEEDBACK

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This seems like a nice first draft but I would just encourage you to provide a bit more detail about the petroleum geology. The additional staff about engineering and production is good but the focus must be on the geology. Perhaps you should have some subheadings specifying the source, reservoir and seal etc. are so that it's really easy to get this information for the reader. Add some more details You might like to think about adding a table summarizing the stratigraphy. I would also suggest a better explanation of the tectonic setting of the continental margin and the origin of the Gulf of Mexico although you can probably refer to an existing page as well. I think you're basically on the right track Pclift (talk) 18:05, 4 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

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The information you have on your page looks well written and well organized. In addition, you have great figures to compliment your article. One thing I noticed is that you could add more information about the tectonic evolution of the Gulf of Mexico Basin. I would recommend checking AAPG database because they have some very informative articles on the subject. Also, you should add a subheading for the source rock, reservoir, and seal. Adding a stratigraphic chart to help identify and describe these units would also benefit your article. Overall, it looks really good so far just give it a few more edits and you should be good to go. Rstief1 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 03:46, 16 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]