User talk:G munish

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Article of BK Shivani

Hello, I edited the details on Shivani Verma (https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Shivani_Verma). However, I got a message for a conflict of interest.

I am completely new to submitting articles on wiki. So, I apologize, I am not clear about how to submit the articles. I know Sister Shivani (Shivani Verma). The below details are submitted to me directly to her. The existing article on her had incorrect details like her date of birth and atleast one other information that she left Brahma Kumaris. She never did. That is why I submitted the article. Could you please let me know the right process to submit the changes?

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Brahma Kumari Shivani has been a practitioner of Rajyoga Meditation that is at the heart of the teachings of Brahma Kumaris World Spiritual Organization, for over 20 years.

With a background in engineering, her ability to analyze deep-rooted emotions is empowering people to take personal responsibility of their lives. Since 2007, she has been sharing spiritual principles for emotional well being on the TV show 'Awakening With Brahma Kumaris'. The show which has crossed the 1,000-episode mark continues to grip audiences across Asia-Pacific, USA, UK, Africa, and Australia. Having become a household name, it has helped people overcome mental stress, depression, addictions, low self-esteem and unhappy relationships. In recognition of her contributions, she has been appointed as Goodwill Ambassador by the World Psychiatric Association.

Catering to packed schedules and packed halls, she has delivered more than 3000 talks in over 20 countries. She travels widely to touch the lives of millions, through diverse platforms such as public programs, interactive workshops, retreats, seminars, corporate training, blogs, social media, radio and television programs. Besidesaddressing individuals and business houses, she connects regularly with over 2 million users who follow her Facebook page and YouTube channel. She also has 2 books to her credit: Happiness Unlimited and Being Love. For her excellence in empowering Spiritual Consciousness, she was honored with the Women of the Decade Achievers Award by ASSOCHAM’S Ladies League. ++++++++++++++++++++++

G munish (talk) 03:47, 20 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@HickoryOughtShirt?4:

Thank you for replying. If you personally know the person it is suggested your propose changes on Talk:Shivani Verma that way other editors can see if it fits a neutral point of view and biography of a living person regulations. Some of the main problems with the additions was the wording which was very fluffy (see WP:PEACOCK) and it removed all references, which are necessary for a biography of a living person. I suggest you add your proposed changes to the talk page for other editors to review. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:01, 20 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Since you say the birth date was incorrect and no source was cited to document the exact birth date, I removed it from the article. I added a citation for the birth year. I also removed the statement about leaving the BKs, since you said that was incorrect and no source was cited to support that. I suggest to review WP:NPOV. We try to phrase things objectively, not like an advertisement. Reliable sources that are independent of the person who is the topic of the article should be cited for facts that are included in the article. —BarrelProof (talk) 15:12, 20 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]