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Transvestism
[edit]I have a few suggestions for improvement for the Wikipedia page on transvestism. Despite being a universal topic, this page is rather brief. The History category claims that transvestism was referred to in the Hebrew Bible, had undergone changes, and "according to some sources" is considered outdated. Here, quotes from the Bible, and examples of changes and sources can be used for clarity and proof. The word "transvestite" is still used today, and it will be interesting to know which sources consider it outdated. The page goes on to describe the origin of the word and cross-dressing which are both effective topics. However, the culture category is extremely brief. A more detailed description of the culture and maybe some references to literary transvestism such as Le Roman de Silence can be helpful for readers of this topic. Overall it is a decent Wikipedia page. There are appropriate references, everything in the article is relative to the topic, and it is neutral. The article just needs more information.
Nature v. Nurture on Roman de Silence page
[edit]Your edit on Nature v. Nurture is summary, not analytical. It doesn't give us any reliable, scholarly refs about the two as tropes in medieval literature or even why they're important manifestations in the roman. — Preceding unsigned comment added by S.C. Kaplan (talk • contribs) 19:21, 8 September 2015 (UTC)