User talk:Functional Frog/Degloving

Peer review

The initial section is great! If the first sentence could have more layperson terminology that could make it even better (rather than subcutaneous tissue layer). Appreciate how you introduce what it is and the two types.

The mechanism section is perfect for closed injury. The causes are very interesting and comprehensive. Appreciate how you put the links in. For presentation, it would be great if some of the terms could be dumbed down a bit. I like how you put in some of the things that make identifying the injury difficult. I would maybe consider describing it visually and then tacking on what can make it challenging to identify. Could give the reader a better idea of why it could be missed.

You explained skin hypermobility very well. One question that came to my mind, was why do these type of lesions occur more commonly in certain areas of the body (ie. the thigh)?

Throughout you did a great job of citing your sources, and keeping all the information pertinent. I look forward to seeing what you do with the rest of the page, just remember to keep the language as simple as possible.

When accessing the article overall, the organization and flow are really good for a medical topic like this. As expected, there was no bias in the article. The articles were all public and from reliable sources! Great job! Cruzgutierrez88 (talk) 00:34, 11 December 2023 (UTC)