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Your submission at Articles for creation: Marie-Jeanne Larrivée Lemière (February 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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Sulfurboy (talk) 04:26, 21 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Froverseas! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Sulfurboy (talk) 04:26, 21 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Marie-Jeanne Larrivée Lemière (February 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CaptainEek was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

My view: she's probably notable. But this doesn't have any inline references. See WP:ERB for a guide on how to do so.

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CaptainEek ^{Edits Ho Cap'n!}⚓ 07:13, 24 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Marie-Jeanne Larrivée Lemière (February 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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Sulfurboy (talk) 17:58, 28 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Marie-Jeanne Larrivée Lemière has been accepted

Marie-Jeanne Larrivée Lemière, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a great rating for a new article, and places it among the top 21% of accepted submissions — kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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DGG ( talk ) 03:38, 3 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Marie-Jeanne Larrivée Lemière

Hi, Froverseas, in the article Marie-Jeanne Larrivée Lemière you have removed sourced information drawn from the recent Dictionnaire de l'Opéra de Paris sous l'Ancien Régime (1669-1791), to the effect that two brothers of Marie-Jeanne played in the Opéra orchestra in the same period as she was engaged as a singer. You restored a previous statement (allegedly drawn from a 1905 book by Arthur Pougin) referring to a sole brother named Jacques. In fact Pougin, an undoubtedly reliable source, just states en passant (p. 121 of his cited book), without even apparently giving the brother's full name: "Sœur cadette d'un violoniste fort distingué ... qui appartint lui-même à l'orchestra de l'Opéra pendant plus de vingt ans, ...".

On the contrary, in her article Larrivée, Marie-Jeanne Lemière, épouse in the aforesaid Dictionnaire, Sylvie Bouissou writes: "Elle est la fille aînée de Louis-Michel Lemière, perruquier, et de Julienne Lemaire, et la sœur de Jacques-Louis et Jacques, respectivement violoncelliste et violoniste en activité à l’Opéra à la même époque".

On both of the Lemière brothers there are specific entries in the Dictionnaire (pp. 522/523) written by Pascal Denécheau.

Since the Dictionnaire is a more recent and detailed source, which does not contradict but only completes Pougin, I believe the previous statement about the two Lemière brothers ought to be restored. Cheers.--Jeanambr (talk) 16:02, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for letting me know! I wasn’t sure about the information—hence why I had it changed. I will look at it as soon as I am home!

Best,

Froverseas. Froverseas (talk) 16:25, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks.--Jeanambr (talk) 22:39, 10 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mademoiselle Petitpas has been accepted

Mademoiselle Petitpas, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Paul W (talk) 10:19, 11 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]