User talk:FrankChen1999/Cycling in the United States
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!
One area to improve as you revise is maintaining a "Neutral Point of View" about this topic (i.e. re-consider the use of words like "luckily"). You'll find more ideas in this Wikipedia policy: [WP:NPOV]. You also might find it useful to run your article through a grammar checking program to streamline the text and eliminate errors.
My general take right now is that you're making good progress on this article, so please keep working. Be sure to incorporate feedback from the peer review. You might find it helpful to apply the peer review guide to your own article as you think about where to go next.
Go Live Approval
[edit]Hi @FrankChen1999:
You are approved to go live with this article. We talked about a few possible new sections and agreed to tone down opinionated language ("mere") but agreed that overall you're ready.
As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:
- Final read-through draft.
- Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
- Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
- Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
- Note on article talk page.
- Note at the top of your sandbox version.
- Celebrate!