User talk:Farahqube
Hi
An invitation to the Teahouse!
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Hello! Farahqube,
you are invited to join other new editors and friendly hosts in the Teahouse, an awesome place to meet people, ask questions, and learn more about Wikipedia. Please join us! Rosiestep (talk) 04:33, 23 March 2012 (UTC)
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Hello! I see that you've been making some large additions to TOMS Shoes. The edits seem very promotional to me. The text added also doesn't feel like the prose used in an encyclopedia. On top of that, all of the information you've added seems to be referenced from the TOMS website itself. All of this together makes it feel like you're advertising for the company. I understand if you enjoy/appreciate/respect TOMS Shoes but the company is a for-profit company and this is an encyclopedia. We need to be careful about the information we add or this will become just another social networking page for the company to advertise on.
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[edit]I made a section on the talk page where you and your group members can discuss the changes you wish to make to the article with other editors. Please utilize the talk page of the article. The section can be found here. OlYeller21Talktome 14:37, 29 March 2012 (UTC)