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Bilbao Airport
[edit]URL: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Bilbao_Airport Comment 1. I found that the proportion of architectural information and historical background is not appropriate. As stated in the overall introduction of Bilbao Airport, it is the terminal designed by Calatrava that makes the airport famous, which leads readers to expect more information related to architecture field. The overall length of the design part is much shorter than the historical background that fails to attract readers. From my perspective, detailed architectural information should be provided to enrich the article since it is categorized as portal of architecture. Comment 2. The comment on the new terminal is not neutral. The emphasis is laid on the defects in terms of use, while the strength of the building is neglected. Calatrava is famous for his revolutionary design on architectural structure, with the terminal of Bilbao Airport to be a good example to show his talent. However, none of those information is mentioned in the article. As far as I am concerned, the elegance and elaboration should be brought to the horizon of the public as well.
Eyepple (talk) 05:23, 15 October 2018 (UTC)
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