User talk:Evilprawn/sandbox
Feedback from Emily
[edit]Emilysessa (talk) 19:56, 14 April 2017 (UTC)
I'm really impressed by the amount of effort you put in between these four pages! They all look really nice, and you improved the existing ones tremendously. The newly created ones look great too.
Paramoebidiidae page: This one doesn't have the little box on the right-hand side giving the classification info that the Amoebidiidae page does have, for example (I think it's called a taxobox). Please add that in, so this page is also linked with other taxonomic pages at levels above and below this family. Right now it's showing up as an orphan, meaning nothing else links to it, so that should be fixed. There are also some notes on there about it being a monotypic taxon and how to deal with that - can you look into that and see if anything that needs to be changed or updated?
Paramoebidium page: It has the taxobox, but there's no link to the family (your page too). Again, just an issue with linking these things together. Also on this page, can you provide a list of the 17 species? See Andre's page on Dicerandra for an example: Dicerandra, a lot of genus pages have a list of the species like this.
Also, On the page for the order, the Paramoebidiidae should be added in there somewhere - I realize the order page is technically not one of the ones you were editing, but for consistency of links, it would be great if you can update that one appropriately too.
Amoebidiidae page: in the Description section, add links every time you include the name Amoebidium; in fact I think it would be better to just link directly to the description on that page, rather than duplicating the text both here and on the genus page. There are also a bunch of words that can be linked to pages specifically for them: spore, sporangiospore, endospore, etc. I think you should read through the page (and probably your other three too) carefully for words like these that probably have their own wikipedia entry that can be linked to.
The content on all of your pages is really great and my comments really just have to do with organization and linking things together more thoroughly. Great job!