User talk:Espinoc226/sandbox
SO100: Instructor Comments
[edit]Good start on this! Some feedback for you to help your progress:
- your sources look great mostly. Keep it up, and let me know if you have any trouble finding sources or figuring out how to format those citations (which are not formatted properly yet)
- One source you CANNOT use is from Wikipedia itself. That's listed in your references. You'll have to remove it.
- Also, discovernursing.com isn't going to be an ideal source for info. Make sure you are using the list of 5 references you found to get the information you discuss in your actual article!
- You don't have any info from the first few citations yet, so make sure to read through them, take notes, and cite where each piece of information in your article comes from.
SO100: Peer Review Comments
[edit]Some feedback: 1. Your sources look great besides the ".com" ones. Those probably wouldn't be a great source of info because they aren't scholarly. 2. The paragraph that you wrote is very informational and well written. 3. At some points, I get lost and do not really know what is going on, as in what you will be writing about and what you have to add to the article. It is probably all there, I would just suggest outlining it with titles for example: What I will add to this article....... Things missing from this article.... 4. Great job! I really like your choice and think you're on track for a great project. Breannabooze (talk) 00:31, 3 April 2017 (UTC)