User talk:Eppy4222
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:26, 21 February 2020 (UTC)
Peer review
[edit]Your article does a great job of letting the readers know who exactly Karl Broman is and what he does right away. I also like the way that it's organized, with the studies and Rstudio sections being entirely separate from the main article. This makes it easier to read and keeps relevant information in the right place.
A change I would make is adding in a little more info about the R package that he created. Maybe it would be hard to do that, but even an example of something that could be made with the package could be a good addition, since the description alone could be a little confusing.
Overall, the most important thing you could do to the article is just add a few more examples of his studies and (if there are any) Rstudio work. Seems like a great start to me but a little more info can't hurt.
When I added in the hyperlink to Johns Hopkins it made me realize that I could probably link a few more things in my existing text that I haven't yet, so I'll take a look at that soon as well.