User talk:Enteryourcleverusername/sandbox

I think you have made some effective edits. I would consider restating the definition of BDSM, or the purpose of BDSM after the statement "when this is not the definition of the practice.” Consider incorporating more information or studies about how it enhances or decreases violence toward women. Overall, I think this is a great start! CitlaliE (talk) 17:47, 21 October 2016 (UTC)