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Your submission at Articles for creation: Maurice Pellosh (February 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

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See WP:VERIFY

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Qcne (talk) 12:30, 12 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Qcne,

Thank you for your feedback. I have re-submitted by accident, and have not made all the necessary adjustments yet. I need a bit of time to work on an in-depth article to include precise sources. This is an article that already exist on Wikipedia France. I am adjusting it to be published on Wikipedia English. The process is less straightforward than I expected. Bear with me whilst I edit it to match the criteria. Emmanuele Béthery EN (talk) 12:47, 12 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Emmanuele Béthery EN! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Qcne (talk) 12:30, 12 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Maurice Pellosh has been accepted

Maurice Pellosh, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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♠ Ca ^{talk to me!} 06:19, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

thank you for the article! I have some suggestions: I noticed some bad usages of present tense - some should be turned into past tense. I also removed the word "pioneer". You need to find a lot of reputable commentator that describe Pellosh as pioneer. Articles should not have unattributed opinions. ♠ Ca ^{talk to me!} 06:21, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Also, consider adding the photo from the French wikipedia. ♠ Ca ^{talk to me!} 06:22, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]