User talk:Ellass22/Everybody's Fine (2016 film)

Peer Review- Ellass22 https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Ellass22/Everybody%27s_Fine_(2016_film)

Lead The lead is fairly concise and it does include very relevant information. I would consider adding a few of the notable actors of the movie although you do have a seperate cast section, I think this would help connect the two sections. I would also consider adding to where the movie was released (theatres, etc) if you have access to that information. You do not really follow up on the director later in your article, so I would suggest adding a section about the producers.

Content I think that the content added is very relevant to the article as it describe the plot of the movie. I would suggest adding a few more paragraphs about the plot of the movie, as do other Wikipedia articles for other movies. Other sections that I found to be helpful from various Wikipedia articles about films are production and inspiration raion for the movie. I would also recommend adding more to the section about reception of the movie.

Tone and balance The article has a good tone as well as it has a neutral balance of information. In some aspects of the article I would consider rewording of the sentences to avoid the tone sounding informal. The author does not attempt to persuade the reader.

Sources and references Sadly the source that was added was not in a language that I know so I cannot speak to the reliability of it. Assuming it is a reliable source, I would also recommend using other sources for when you add more paragraphs to your plot so that way your plot summary does not become biased by only using one source.

Organization The content added is well organized and is coherent for any reader. It seems although the grammar is good as well.

Overall impressions I think that the contributions that you added are really helpful for the article as you added a brief plot summary. I think your article would appear more complete if you added more information to the plot. Likewise, I would recommend adding the sections that I previously mentioned. Leonaaklipi (talk) 05:41, 23 October 2020 (UTC)