User talk:Eisha Afzal/Effects of climate change

Peer review

I have added my peer review Bellaruby12 (talk) 19:47, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Thank you for your peer review. How can I make the sources accessible for you to view in our sandbox? On my end, I am able to easily click on the sources through the superscripts embedded into the text. Most of the articles are peer reviewed and found through the BC library so I wonder if you are not able to see the full article because of that. I also do agree with you that the flow of the statements is a bit poor. Since my group is in the beginning stages of developing our edits for this article, we will definitely work on refining our sentences to make reading it smoother for the reader. I hope that as we continue moving forward with our article you notice this issue is resolved. Ablip (talk) 20:35, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review #2

Hello, I have added my peer review. Please let me know if you need any explanation or help. 4theloveofAH (talk) 20:42, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Thank you for peer reviewing our article and offering some insight on where you think some of our information should go. While I feel that a good amount of the information overlaps, I will most likely incorporate your recommendations into our future edits. Ablip (talk) 20:54, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]