User talk:Edyn glass
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[edit]I notice that some of the edits you made do not constitute an improvement. (I particularly noticed the edit where your the edit comment has "grammar" misspelled.)
Here are my comments on each one:
- Stiphodon atropurpureus: Special:diff/oldid/1259905823
- The commas you inserted are completely extraneous.
- Beach evolution: Special:diff/oldid/1259985768
- Insertion of the auxiliary verb "has" implies that this is an ongoing process, which is inappropriate in this context.
- The commas you inserted are completely extraneous.
- M. Louise Thomas: Special:diff/1259810206/1259987579
- Although "unrestrictedly" seems a bit awkward; nevertheless, an adverbial form is required.
- The other part you changed was perfectly fine; your modified version is not an improvement.
In the future, please make sure that your edits actually make an improvement to the article. Edits made just for the sake of it are a waste of everybody's time. Fabrickator (talk) 06:45, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- I think that the first article you brought up was in need of commas, because the writer was listing colors. Commas are typically used when listing. As for the second edit, I can see that adding the word "has" was inappropriate in the context, but I feel that the commas should be used as the writer is listing. In the third article I agree that I should not have changed "unrestrictedly" to "unrestricted." I changed the sentence in paragraph six to make it clearer. Edyn glass (talk) 18:42, 28 November 2024 (UTC)