User talk:Edithermanson/sandbox2
Make robot types subheaders, to more clearly divide and improve readability. It summaries well, could have more specific information or citations to current research and developments. For example the education robots, the media center does some really cool research on language development using a robot that adapts to the child's language skills and machine learning elements. Mentioning some of these projects could add some interesting details.
You are also editing a really big article, I feel like you might need to find more pieces to edit or create to meet things like word count. You need more information overall.
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