User talk:Ebrault/sandbox

Emily's Peer Review

The work you have written so far regarding intersectionality of Transfeminism seems very promising, offering neutral content with a reliable source. The topic, itself, is an important concept of Transfeminism and why I believe it is a good idea to further explore. The direction, I would suggest, may be to explain the ways in which this is similar to feminism and ways it is not. This can be similar to being seen as the "other" but maybe even more extreme. Kaitlin 121 (talk) 02:10, 1 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

So far, what you have written about intersectionality is really important to include under the topic of transfeminism. Your sources are reliable and your work is not biased in amy way. I would suggest branching off of the different connections of intersectionality (such as transfeminism and race) and elaborate on some of those topics. It sounds great so far! --Dresnick95 (talk) 03:58, 1 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]